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    Unhappy love poem....???

    My eyes are heavy
    They wallow with the crust
    That keeps cheeks dry
    From past reluctant tears

    Thoughts, worries
    Responsibilities
    Trample, stampede
    Hemorrhage my brain
    And turning to you
    Lessens none

    Nay, your love
    Endless love

    Warms me
    When we laugh
    When we talk
    For talk’s sake
    When we cuddle
    In affection
    When we kiss
    In passion

    Burns me
    When comforting
    In its severity
    Is giddy and
    Joking
    When intimacy
    Always finds you
    Submissive

    But the wind
    Sweeps away the ashes
    And you complete me
    Last edited by spamboy67; 11-03-04 at 09:33 PM.
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    oh man,.. that was beautiful.. wow..
    "Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
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    "...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
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    thank you
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