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Thread: Words from my heart

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    Unhappy Words from my heart


    Through these tears, I try to smile.

    Though it hurts, I try to hide.

    Your love used to drive me crazy.

    But now it is only driving me lonely.

    I just keep on thinking of that day.

    When I had very little to say.

    That day I could not cry but it rained.

    That day I could not say but it pained.

    But you did not notice anything.

    Surely because you did not know everything.

    I try a lot to find an excuse.

    But I don’t understand what made you refuse.

    I surely did not deserve this.

    But no one will ever give me justice.

    At night I just can’t sleep.

    What did I sow and what did I reap?

    How I wished you were here.

    But there’s no one near.

    Perhaps you didn’t believe that my love was true.

    But I meant it when I said I love you.

    But everything is over.

    I shall love never.

    Never again.

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    Bit depressing isn't it? cant talk though,no good love poems are ever happy

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    have to say it like it is

    good stable poem with a big emo ending starting from perhaps

    i like it

    you should get youre poems rated if there all this good

    greets eXeSSum
    A dying man once said, i do not know if life or death will be better... for love was more than them together.

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    such a sad poem.

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    so nice
    thanks

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