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Thread: i cant promise

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    i cant promise

    cant always promise to make you happy

    sometimes things just dont feel right

    cant promise the moon or the stars

    only that I will be here to see you through the night

    wont promise you forever with its poetic never end

    only that I will be here for every today that you will let me in

    wont swear to love undying in its childish form

    but swear to a love with roots deep enough to weather through any storm

    I cant say i beleive in majic and fairy tales no more

    but I believe in a love that I have never felt before

    for each day I will try to do the right thing

    for each night I will thank god for your loving

    all I can do is try to make this right

    to be true and steady for a love worth my life

    its another try

    its another time

    its another love

    like the one we left behind
    is fate your destiny

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    so on this forum it seems to be good not to get any comments on your poem cause all the ones i see are bashing
    is fate your destiny

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