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    Nothing Can Compare To You

    by Ma'arab © Copyrights

    Should I compare you to a beautiful dove
    but the beauty it has won't be enough
    maybe then to a lovely rose
    then again it lacks the pose
    to then a calmed view of the sunset
    but the calmness of your smile is not met
    to a diamond maybe that so much shines
    doesn't but sparkle like thine eyes
    to the clearest crystal people adore
    but it's unlike your heart that's so pure
    to then maybe the morning dew
    but does it glitter like you do?
    to a rainbow then with all the color
    besides your character it seems smaller
    to the elegant pearl in the oyster's shell
    then again it's not that pretty as well
    maybe to the wonderful breeze, so thin
    not but near to the freshness of your skin
    to the horizon then, fading in the blue
    still is not inspiring as are you
    to the redness then of the most red cherry
    not but as thy cheeks when you are merry
    to then the white snow that's soft so much
    is not still, as soft as your touch
    maybe to the spring that's full of life
    not as lively as you are, being my wife
    to an angel then that has so pretty wings
    but a smile like yours, it can never bring
    the list will run miles, this is true
    nothing can possibly compare, ever, to you
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    Thumbs down no2

    [size=2]TPL is the best! Keep up the great work!

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    Hey that's really good work you have there. I see you took your time on this
    I broke the signature rules, so Frasbee had to put me in my place. If I continue to break this or any other forum rule, Frasbee will ban me.

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    Really nice poem! I actually enjoyed reading every word of it, I can also see that you put a lot of work into it, unlike me...I just say what comes out first, and usually without any sense! lol!

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