I'm an Amature writer, more of a hobby thing and I was just looking for people that feel like reading a bit to give an honest opinion on my style and where i need work. (grammar is a given i suck with grammar but my beta hasn't edited it yet :p) but if you want to help me out then i would love it.

[url]http://xanderphyction.livejournal.com/[/url]
is where it's posted