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    Yours

    To my one and only Tom,

    It's too hard to explain in words how I feel, but I'll try
    I'll try my best to tell you, in letters, words, my love for you

    This letter, poem, however you may name it
    It's to tell you like I always often do
    Is that I love you with anything there is
    More than my heart itself, more than life itself
    I never thought I would know what love is, but I do now
    All thanks to you, I've fallen for you, I am in love with you
    Everyone says you can only fall in love once, but that's not true
    Everytime I hear your voice, I fall in love all over again

    It hurts me to see you cry, to see your tears run
    Sometimes it worries me, pains me, but no matter what the reason is
    I will always be here for you, in your arms, holding you close
    Looking deep into your eyes, always make me feel so loved
    Kiss me and smile for me, tell me what you want from me
    Hold me like you'll never let me go, everybody needs somebody

    You're always in my mind, everything I do, I do for you
    I myself can not imagine my life without you
    Not anymore, no, you are a big part of my life, you are my life
    And I hope that will never change, I don't want it to ever
    My life, my world was black and white until the day
    You walked through my life and into my heart
    Take my hand and we'll make it together forever, I swear

    Nobody can feel the way I feel about you
    They think they do, but they don't see or feel this
    They're just jealous because we're young and in love
    Love's more than just a feeling, they wouldn't know that
    You and me were meant to be, you make life worth living
    Every dream you made come true, for all the love I found in you
    I'll be forever thankful, you're the one who held me up
    Never letting me fall, you're the one who saw me through it all

    Sometimes at night, I can't drift to sleep, can't go off to dream of you
    Instead I lay in my bed twisting and turning, cold and alone
    You weren't by my side, you were not here, keeping me safe and warm
    There's not a day or night where I don't dream or think about you
    Your name is carved everywhere, on paper, the sky, in my heart
    My heart is yours to fill or burst, to break
    Or bury or wear as jewellery, Whichever you prefer

    If I happen to be gone one day, please don't ever forget me
    It hurts me to know that I won't see you today or tomorrow
    But I'll always be with you, watching over you
    You gave me wings and you made me fly, I'm here
    I'm your angel in the sky and you are mine too
    You're heaven sent, god made you for me to love you
    I will hold you in my heart until I can hold you in my arms again
    Read this over and over, so that you know my love for you is true

    My life is yours to love, ruin, save or hurt
    Whatever you may want to do with it, no matter what
    I will never stop loving you, my love, my life, me, I'm yours
    You are always here for me whenever I needed someone
    You go through everything with me, most of the times for me
    You saw the best there was in me, you gave me faith because you believe
    I'm everything I am, because you love me

    Your Skye

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    VERY Sweet Skye-great writing gal!
    everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

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    I like what it says - but its not a poem to me - At least I wouldnt consider it a poem - I think all poetry must have some kind of rhyming system. This work has no rhyming at all.

    Just my two cents - but yes - it is nice Skye.

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    poetry doesnt have to ryhme Billy.
    everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

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    meh - it does to me - lol

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    ok so to you it does...
    everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.

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    correctomundo

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    Poetry is depth of feeling...

    Its about meaning, not ryhming (although its fun to work with and fun to hear).


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    I agree with Innova. Although I wouldn't say it's fun to work with.. LoL.. I find it bloomin' hard.. that's one reason why I would or want to write a rhymin' Poem.. Well.. that's just me really..
    By the way.. Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it.

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