Just wondered what people thought of this poem/song...

I've lost the one that I love
She's gone to be free, just like a dove
I can't believe it's come to this
Each day I dream of her kiss

I miss the way she held me tight
And cuddled me all through the night
I miss the way we had a laugh
But now we've wandered from our path

I look back now and I can see
I took her love so selfishly
I kept my feelings locked deep inside
Just because of my stupid pride

If I could have her love again
I'd never cause her that much pain
For she certainly means more to me
Than friends, or even family

That's what is so hard for me to take
I never saw what was at stake
So now she's gone and I'm alone
But I'm trying my hardest not to moan

I know one day soon she'll be in the arms of another
To her, I'll be just like a brother
For me that will be the final pain
And my loss will undoubtedly be his gain

I know it is time for me to move on
I recognised that by writing this song
If she never knew how much I cared
I hope this song has truly shared

So as I write this, through my tears
I am remembering those special years
My love for her, it still grows
She's my angel, my princess, my summer rose