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Thread: just something i wrote tonite

  1. #1
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    just something i wrote tonite

    any feed back would be gd :


    'Tease me with your touch, whisper in my ear.
    See the smile on my face, the kiss on your lips.
    I will take you in my arms, and keep you safe.
    Ill help you feel things that you deserve to feel,
    The noises you make are like music to me.
    I hope I mean as much as you mean to me.'


    cheers
    larks
    xx

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    its allright

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    You got talent

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