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    True Love

    Like an apple that falls
    From blue sky above
    Gravity takes over
    Its a lot like love

    Love is a mystery
    No time, place, or thing
    Can you find it in the air?
    Invisible in between

    Is it a feeling inside?
    Or is it physical pleasure?
    I can't tell for certain
    But I do have a suspicion

    Maybe it's a force
    That can't be undone
    Its an avalanche within
    That takes your heart over

    Its the things you never said
    And its the things you always did
    And those moments in between
    That I define as love

    You can see it in her eyes
    A sea of endless skies
    The sun with all its rays
    The warmth she has inside

    I have not found love
    Its something that can't be found
    It is something that just is
    A feeling that will come

    So like an apple that falls
    From blue sky above
    Instead I just float
    As I wait for true love

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    wow! so romantic. thanks for sharing this.

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    Great effort. I like the connections you make to nature's power. Love can be more powerful than all the avalanches in the world combined.
    Oops! I purport myself to be a literary professional, but I can't even read the forum rules about advertising!

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    Excellent.

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    It really is beautifull

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    Its the things you never said
    And its the things you always did
    And those moments in between
    That I define as love

    You can see it in her eyes
    A sea of endless skies
    The sun with all its rays
    The warmth she has inside


    wooooW! i like that very much
    dear u have nice feelings which not exist in many of men

    God bless u

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