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Thread: Not another love poem!!!!

  1. #1
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    Not another love poem!!!!

    Another love poem
    Compares the moon to your beauty
    Your touch like a feather
    Blah blah blah blah blah

    Do you really buy this crap
    These words that I write
    Or would you rather hear the truth
    The reason I stay up an night?

    Forget the stars above
    I don't care about the moon
    The World can have their Sun
    Because I already have you

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    awwwwwwwww.

    i wrote a similar short little poem a couple months ago...

    with you i am free
    i am in chains
    i deserve better
    and i'm not worthy
    when it bright and warm i have the sun
    when it's dark and cold i have you.

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
    baby ya hustle. but me i hustle harder.


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    awww! i like it! somebody is your sun and light!

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    Like the stars in the sky,
    I am calling to you.
    From the heavens above,
    I am looking for you.

    In the depths of my soul,
    I will live and breathe for you.

    Sadness dwells inside you;
    You have nothing to fear,

    for I am next to you.
    I can feel your sadness;

    Let me be sad for you,
    so you will feel love once again.

    Worry not about life,
    let me worry for you.

    You should always love life,
    for it is a part of you.

    I'll be there when you fall,
    to catch you and say I Love You...

    Brian P. Blake
    I didn't follow the rules and now I'm in trouble.

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    I like it!

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    woah
    this poem is tight!!

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