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    Haiku

    Gangsters pimps and whores
    Anywhere I go they are there
    Love San Francisco

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    Rich is vanity
    Trusted, but not rewarded any
    Enron screwed us all

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    Blue steel is so cold
    Took much of what I can bear
    Forever in peace

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    Lay low down in trench
    RPGs may take my head
    But not my freedom

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    Two giants fell that day
    One morning of September
    Will never forget

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    very well written, i enjoyed it
    im the shit like mr.hanky

    THROWING ROOTBEARS IN YO FRIDGE BEHATCH

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    Thanks Clifton. Here's a quicky:

    LoveForum's da bomb
    All you players come on over
    Join da fun'Ofun

    Um, yeah I know. Damn corny. I love haiku. Does anyone else have their own to share? I'd like to see some.

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    Although I'm more of a traditional poet, and don't write very many of them, I do like Haiku's. They are simple, straight to the point, and yet an haiku can have the deepest of meanings within its very function.


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    I love that last one m0by. Tres bon!

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