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Thread: The Dying Heart

  1. #1
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    The Dying Heart

    Alone once more
    My darkening heart bleeds
    As I stumble through the empty halls
    Where love once flourished
    As we wrote another Romeo and Juliet
    And we agreed it was meant to be

    But you had other plans
    As my heart beat fades
    As I am reminded of you
    By a simple locket
    You shattered my heart into
    Tiny glass shards
    On a calm fall eve
    And left me this curse
    That consumes my dying soul

    My heart stops
    And turns black
    As I collapse
    Onto the cold concrete floor
    With locket in hand

    Alone once more
    For eternality
    I would like to die knowing the greatest poison of life....LOVE.

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    Fantastic, I really loved it

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    wow, nice...

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    But you had other plans
    As my heart beat fades
    As I am reminded of you
    By a simple locket
    You shattered my heart into
    Tiny glass shards
    On a calm fall eve
    And left me this curse
    That consumes my dying soul


    woooow really really Fantastic like it so much dear ..whats such word emerges from the innermost part of heart
    God bless u always

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