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    Infatuation

    Infatuation

    Restless slumber
    Prevailing darkness
    Tugging at my mind.
    Hope vanquished, faith remains
    Slipping away unto a land of
    Nothingness.

    Personal creations
    Dancing in the abyss
    Enveloped in midnight
    Yet crystal clear.
    Where have they gone?

    Woken again
    By unheard voices
    Deafening silence
    Flows through the room.

    Drifting into sleep
    Peaceful outside
    Peaceful within.

    Worries vanish
    Fears disappear.

    The cycle beings again.
    An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.

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    I don't really understand where the title of this fits in with the actual poem. can u give us some insight into what your inspiration to writing this was.
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    I love your poem. It's well good. Infatuation means like love but it's not actually love. You think it's love. Sumin' along those lines.

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    Infatuation does not have to do with one single object, but with many. Obessive over lifes complexities can create a cloud of lingering darkness that ones mind tries to consume and understand. I think this is the "jist" of his poem.


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    It is about a restless night sleep caused by extreame infatuation. The poem itself is about a singular awakenening during that night.
    An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.

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    See I did finally read it! As always your talent astounds me.

    I think the mistake a lot of us make is thinking the state-appointed shrink is our friend. - Jack Handy

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