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Thread: Longin' for someone out there

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    Longin' for someone out there

    A poem / song I wrote a long time ago.
    If you liked this or the way I write I have like 50 poems so I you want to switch or discuss, just send me a pm or something

    I'm sittin' in the bottom of a well,
    And you're the key in my prison cell.
    Are you going to help me out?
    I understand it's easier to leave me here,
    I mean everything I say to you my dear.
    Why can't you get out of my head?
    I actually wish my feelings were dead.

    Through this time I used my map
    To make sure you didn't set out a trap
    You never played it clean
    Using me to just get between.
    I take a great big look inside myself,
    You are really just bad for my health
    I won't stop you to go down another path
    You don't know my heart is a bloodbath
    Twist everything inside-out so feelings go away
    You're the dancing queen who don't know ballet.
    I have always wanted to call you my drug
    Cause everytime I see you my brain unplugges.
    Now it's a long time since I've been that high.
    This kind of rehab is hard, that's something I can't deny.

    I wish I could wanish up in the sky,
    This goes out to you as a last goodbye.
    No-one will help me out of this well
    So instead I found a fast way to hell
    They say a bright light you see at the end,
    I've never seen it, so why bother to extend?
    It's over now, I'm done conquering all my fears.
    I will just sit here and drown in my own tears.


    Sorry for errors, I'm Norwegian.

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    Very Nice, that is excellent. I would sure be interested to hear some of your others.

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