I Couldn't Live

[sweetdreamz018]

Haven't written much poetry before, but I was just laying in my bed writing in my journal one day, and this just kinda popped in my head...


I couldn't live without your voice
To calm and soothe my fear
A voice so gentle just like an angel's
Assures me that you're near

I couldn't live without your eyes
To look into every time and see
Your magical world where our dreams come true
I could gaze for eternity.

I couldn't live without your touch
Your arms around me in warm embrace
Gentle caresses of little sweet kisses
So soft like delicate lace.

I couldn't live without your love,
Your smile, your care, your kiss
You're all I need to just go on
Without you, I’d be lifeless

[Nafnir]

Wow thats really good. I like that alot.

[Innova]

Wow, thats pretty good, nice!

[Cuzoe]

Hey, I really like that. I would like it even more had my girl of 4 years not just left me, but yeah. I really really like it, call me up some time, and sing it to me, i'll play the guitar.

[CR's Baby Girl]

i really like it. if you dont mind i am going to send it to my guy! that is exactly how i feel as well! dont worry i will give you credit for writing it!