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  1. #1
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    Untitled #1

    I want to lie down here on this field
    Never get up and never be revieled
    I want to start live under water
    Never breath again, but not die
    I want to stand in a big flame
    and burn so I can shout your name
    Sometimes I want to sell my soul
    But it must still be under my control
    Will I ever lay in a cofinn
    Without the fear of being burried?
    Every day of my life feels like a Sun's day
    Die more just to make people feel okay.
    I'll never again smell your perfume
    And I'll never again be in bloom.
    When love hits you, you will always feel pain.
    When music hits you, you will never feel pain.

  2. #2
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    hi dear ...

    what’s big pain u have inside ....i am really feel so sad
    love always brings pain and sad

    i think the title is pain
    thanks so much dear

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