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Thread: This is what my ex wrote to me and gave me the day he knew I was breaking up with him

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    Post This is what my ex wrote to me and gave me the day he knew I was breaking up with him

    (all spelling errors and syntax is copied directly from the letter)

    One last poem

    To my sweetheart I right with streams of tears for on last time for this is truly the last draw, here is the last poem i will right to you for i fear our time is near..

    But please let me kiss you on last time and tell it isn't so that you do not feel what you used to feel before..

    Final goodbye to my love

    A cloudy day invades my sky
    when you just know that angels will cry.
    The world seems upside down to me
    hills of snow hundreds appear to be.
    With beauty and elegance they pass by
    in a rush they go without saying goodbye.
    A discolored sea by the minute gets dark
    it's the sky sea obscured without a spark.
    Gust of wind caresses my face and hair
    the smell of humidity concentrates in the air.
    When you just know that angels will cry
    because of a wounded heart that is about to die.
    It was a true benediction to fall in love
    soaring through out this sky like a dove.
    My piteous bawl outbeats the thunder
    and my hopes to be love are going under.
    My true love, it's slipping away from my hand
    like the foamy tides drifts away from the sand.
    As the light of your eyes wither with every kiss
    just know that the warmth of your presence i'll miss.

    And that comes from the bottem of my heart sweetie ur
    The best and always will be in my eyes weather we are together
    As friends or lovers... I will always love you!!

    Love you always Michael

    Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
    Xoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoox

    (I searched this poem on the internet and I found it in French Yahoo Questions. Oh, and I should add that we had only been going out for 3 months. A BIT over the top I think...! I read this poem when I'm feeling sad because it makes me laugh so much!)

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    LOL so he think that this would change anything? doh!

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    Ohh that was Cute if he had not search it out from the internet :S

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