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  1. 13-09-09, 05:48 PM #1
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    Your Lips

    Like an apple.
    Red and delicious.
    The answer to my prayers and wishes.

    Full of smiles when happy.
    A bit of pout when sad.
    Full of sweet kisses.
    That makes my heart glad.

    Full of kind words.
    When someimes I feel gloom.
    Full of sweet songs.
    That could fill a room.
  2. 28-10-09, 02:55 AM #2
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    cool poem!
  3. 18-01-10, 02:36 AM #3
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    Use more metaphors. I love it when a writer compares two things you don't normally see together and makes it believable.
  4. 27-02-10, 09:12 AM #4
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    yeah right...
  5. 10-04-10, 12:28 AM #5
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    thats really good...like it!!
  6. 16-04-10, 12:56 PM #6
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    Great Poem!
  7. 02-07-10, 09:50 PM #7
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    Amazing words!! well deserved trophies!!
    Very sensual and heartwarming!! Thank you
    so much for sharing!!
    We must be the change we want to see
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