A story I wrote

[DarkDwarf]

Hey, whats up everyone. I just finished this story, and I figured I'd post it here. I'm interested to know what everyone thinks. I guess it's a love story.

I uploaded it as an attachment due to formatting issues and the fact that it is eight or nine pages long. Took me about a year to complete, simply because I often lacked the inspiration to do finish it.

Anyway, read away. I literally haven't read it since I finished it. I can't stand reading my own stories. I understand there are probably many punctuations issues, but it isn't a finished content as far as being in a finalized state, but it is finished in the sense that it is essentially final as far as content is concerned.

I right for fun, but I particularly fell in love with this story, not because it is one of my best, but because I definitely like the subject matter. And I guess I don't really know why I fell in love with it. Do we ever really know all the reasons we fall in love? (maybe we do, lol. Never been in love... I think)

[Gigabitch]

Cute story, and no, your punctuation isn't horribly flawed.

[s_b]

Thanks for sharing your story - i enjoyed reading it. More please :-)

(and it reminded me of my canoe escapade earlier this year - got washed up and stranded on some sinking, stinking mud...jeez, the worse smell ever).

[DarkDwarf]

Yeah, horribly flawed was probably the wrong phrasing. I generally write a fairly good first draft grammatically, but I know there are some mistakes.

[Thanatos]

keep writing. It will help you improve your communication skills.

[nesossin]

Yep thank you for sharing it! It was rather cute.