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Thread: I never let you go

  1. #1
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    Red face I never let you go

    I froze,but I'm melting,
    So close and so far.
    It wasn't me who held you,
    It was the evening stars.

    It was the night who teased you,
    The never ending fall.
    It wasn't me who kissed you,
    It was the alcohol.

    I won't be concealing,
    I just want you to know.
    I never had those feelings,
    I never let you go.
    You cannot see my twisted mess...

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    It's a beautiful Good for you!

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    Thank you!Glad you liked it.
    It's a shame that it's over and I don't have this inspiration anymore.
    Nothing better than a miserable love for writing good poems.
    You cannot see my twisted mess...

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    wow I love it O.O Very nice
    ~The 3 things needed for Happiness: Something to do, Something to love and something to hope for.~

    I am no expert, take everything I say with a large grain of salt.

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    omg, itīs great

  6. #6
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    Baby, I just want you to know
    That i will never let you go
    I'll always be there by your side
    From now until the day i die
    This is a promise fomr the heart
    I knew i loved you from the start
    I stood beside yo everyday
    And showed you i cared in everyway
    So from now on out my life is you
    It's now a lie baby this is true
    Forever and always is what we'll be
    It now is us not just you and me
    Together we will be as one
    Until my final day is done
    WE'll fall asleep toghether everynight
    And awake with a kiss in the morining light
    I cant wait for the day when we say I Do
    Because I will always love you
    So baby I just wanted you to know
    That I will never let you go

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    Thank you for the tender words

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