Third attempt... gotta come up with more creative titles! lol...

[GBRaul]

Though this may sound a little cliche
I say, I say that you are my sun
I am like the Earth spinning around you
I just cannot pull away from your attraction, hun!

As Earth, I hear the whole world's clocks
On my chest making their tick tocks
I don't want to see time take you away
I want you to be happy every single day

My heart longing for you
My eyes looking at you
It seems as if I'm already
So so close to you

The sky is so clear, the sky is so cloudless
But about your feelings, I still feel so clueless

[Breezy18]

hmmmmmm........do I see a pattern here?
Good job GB. Keep it up.

[GBRaul]

Yeah... there's a pattern... X attempt haha. Oh well, in the middle of my examinations now so I can't spend too much time writing poems now Maybe after exams... hopefully I do well! *fingers crossed*