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    unrequited love poem

    I never knew beauty until I first laid my eyes upon you
    I never seemed to get your out of my mind no matter what I tried to do

    I wish I could be in your life...at least have a small part
    But all I can hope is just to have a special place inside of your heart

    But your beauty can't wipe away my tears
    It's your love that can...but I haven't been able to find that even though I've searched for years

    I guess my thoughts of us were just only a myth..
    I'm sorry I wasn't the guy you wanted your dream life with
    I'm sorry I acted like a fool, even from the start
    I'm sorry I never could find the way to your heart

    This is probally the hardest pain I've gone ever gone through
    Day after day I can only find myself wondering if I'll ever be with somebody as beautiful as you

    Sometimes I just wish I could dream with you and never let it end
    Because I'm afraid I won't ever meet anybody as special as you again

    Sometimes I wish I could be everything you've ever dreamed of so we could be together
    And that's probally going to be my only wish to God, forever

    I'm sure that whatever happens, I won't ever change my feelings about you
    And even though I've tried and tried...it seems like you won't ever too

    Though I try to do everything I can I only find myself without you and lonely
    Despite everything...I still believe we could of had a wonderful life if only you had desired me..
    if only...

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    pretty good. did you write it yourself?
    Within you I lose myself. Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.

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    yeah. i've wrote about 20 in the last 6 months or so

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    That's a lot of writing.

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    That is an amazing poem it make me fart

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