I come from inside you

[catheaven]

i tried to think of a way of exposing this without touching you and it made no sense.
i found the same problem to be a million times worse. you always feel attacked.
and who am i to tell you that you're wrong?
you've got such good eyes for seeing the best in everyone but me.
it's negative. another bottle for the window sill.
the weather matches your mood again.
i come from inside you.
but i can't crawl back inside.
maybe you need a little less than what you took for granted.
a little more of what you didn't want.
humility will decide which one of us is wrong.
you know i wouldn't run you over.
i just want to talk it out.
drink down your pride.
it'd be a measure of maturity if anything.
you can't hate me.
i come from inside you.

[Raj1974]

this is sweet

[fishman10]

Thats a really Cool poem

[IndiReloaded]

A thinking poem. One of the better ones I've seen on here in a long while. Great job.

[mwahahaha]

looks like a bad google translate to me. "its negative. another bottle for the window sill"? wtf is that supposed to mean?
Also, it dont even rhyme.
Dont send that to your bird dude, please.

[Kokz143]

Wonderful! Feel like reading it over and over again.