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    Scenes from a Shower

    Scenes from a Shower

    The hot steam
    from the thundering shower
    created a misty veil
    but not so thick
    it clouds the fire in your eyes
    a secret white world
    just we two
    the hunger in mine as I slip my hands exploring down your thighs
    Happy explorers on your slippery flesh
    i dig my nails in
    my smiles curling like a contented cat's and yours
    like some demon
    thinking of some new delightful sin
    As I sink to my kneees and with thirsting lips ...
    taking you in

    Your moans echo of the shower walls
    not entirely drownedby the pulsing rain
    of shower and bubly soap
    my throat murrmurring in refrain
    gobbling your delicious #*@=
    as i dig my nails futher in
    your hands wrap my wet slick hair
    and you pull me closer to you
    your hips bucking foward
    as I drink deeper of you
    No noserferatu
    could be as happy sucking as I
    my lips touching pubic hair
    I hear your wild cry
    and drink deep ...drink deep the creamy life force
    worshiping on my knees
    and with loving slippery tongue
    you're the god I try to please
    What Matters Most is HOW you SEE Yourself".

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    Reminds me of a porno I was watchin' a few weeks ago.

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    oh so you do jerk off! Great! Then why are you sometimes such a grump?
    It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone - but it takes a lifetime to forget someone"

    People change and forget to tell each other.

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    nice poem!!

    although im not good at grading poems but i can tell u this is damn good dude. so horny lo this poem haha maybe i give to my gf lol

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    First poem I've read on this site in MONTHS. Nice. Although I could've done without the "I dig my nails in" line . . .

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