In many ways I long to be with you
Your voice is just like a beautiful dove
Women with looks like yours there are few
I swear you have come from up above
I give this to you without a name
Because my emotions are so tender
And I know you are worth more then my shame
You have become my life bender
I know you deserve better then me
I would be blessed to have you as a wife
And just like you I long to be free
But you are the one with a perfect life
I know you are a jewel I will never have
Your eyes are more beautiful then the sea
And I will always long to hear you laugh
But a distant admirer I must always be
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12-09-11, 03:02 AM #1
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The Jewel I Don't Deserve
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12-09-11, 03:47 AM #2
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Really beautiful and from the heart, love it thanks for sharing
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01-10-11, 03:38 PM #3
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Makes sense, I guess!!!
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I loved the rhyming! Nice job!
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17-11-11, 08:42 PM #5
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Beautiful And Meaningful
thanks
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25-11-11, 11:59 PM #6
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Very deep, quite touching.
Express the Unexpressed ......... <3
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