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    Distant Wind

    The wind is distant today, it whistles around the buildings very far away.

    This sun shines with sadness on the buildings so cold on the horizon.

    I know you're out there somewhere ......, with someone I've never met.

    Happiness seems so lost with this distant wind on my mind, and I wonder.. do you ever regret?

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    pish, try harder

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    Nice poem, you should elongate it a bit, good job
    Express the Unexpressed ......... <3

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