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    Negativity

    If you smother me
    With negativity
    You may come to see
    A different side of me
    A side that shouldn't be
    A side that wouldn't be
    If you hadn't smothered me
    With your negativity

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    nice
    I must read others from You
    All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing.
    Edmund Burke
    A true master paralyze's his opponent
    Leaving him vulnerable to an attack

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    thanks, I realize it's simple, but it just sounded good to me.

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    Sometimes the most simple of poems, have the greatest of meaning. A lot people are drawn into this misconception that poetry, must be long and able to rhyme....not so.


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    To bad I don't realy understand the entire "smothering with negativity" part . So is smothering with positivity something ...good? Whats the difference?
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    To me it meant dwelling on something bad, and basically refusing to move on. Sure if something horrible happens it's... horrible, but never letting go isn't healthy.

    Good moods are contagious, as are bad moods. People generally like to be around happy people too. But if someone you really care about was always sad... you'd either become sad too or get fed up and move on without them.

    To smother someone with positivity? Well, that seems like it wouldn't be so bad... there isn't any real reason I can think of to try not to be happy and spread happiness to others. "smother" would be a bad way to describe that though, maybe "shower".
    Hope that helps.

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    I'm bumping this, it should be read more.

    I'm not a big fan of poems because they tend to be too musy or depressing but this one I like!
    Impossible is a word only to be found in the dictionary of fools.

    Napoleon I

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    that's it? is that finished?

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    anymore would be too much.
    Impossible is a word only to be found in the dictionary of fools.

    Napoleon I

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