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Thread: Something I wrote for my girl...

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    Something I wrote for my girl...

    This is something I wrote for my girlfriend. Lemme know what you think...

    I don't know why I feel the way I do
    I don't know why I can't stop thinking about you
    Maybe it's because you're the cutest thing I've ever seen
    Or maybe it's because I wanna make this princess into my queen
    Just thinkin' about not seein' you gives me a horrible feelin' in my stomach
    One that makes me wanna throw-up and vomit
    When you told me that I made you cry
    It hurt so ****in' bad deep down inside
    So I'm sorry for that
    I wish I could go back in time and take it back, but I can't
    To tell you the truth, I wish we could both move
    Into a place with other, I'd even let you choose
    Sure we'd have fights, but it'd be alright
    I'd hold and cuddle you every night
    I never meta girl that made me wanna be a better person
    Until I met you, girl can't you see that I'm hurtin?
    I'm just so sorry and I hope you'll forgive me
    Just please write back or call me later babie

    -DK

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    I would title it "Infatuation" ( a.k.a love).
    "Why are you an atheist?"
    "because I paid attention in science class."

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