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    Dark with a chance of sun

    Blackened skies, angry cries.
    Hand reached out, face with a pout.
    Tired of it, want to quit.
    Sleep sounds good, if I could.
    Lay in bed forever, wish the past was never.
    Hoping all brings a crack, erasing what I lack.
    I'm not the only one ...
    Dark with a chance of sun.

    This is my own poem. About my current feelings on my situation.

    I was told to journal and write, so I did. I don't care if it is good or not, only that it helps.

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    It's a wonderful poem, Joanna. There is indeed light at the end of the tunnel. Never doubt it. I have walked a long way myself and I can guarantee you that the change you long for exists. The only thing that you might not be able to perceive now is just how amazing it will be. It will totally exceed your expectations. It will blow you away. Pure joy, love and happiness do that.

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    really nice poem, joanna and i liked what valixy told you as well. hope you share more.
    When I tell the truth, it is not for the sake of convincing those who do not know it, but for the sake of defending those that do.
    William Blake

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    Quote Originally Posted by Valixy View Post
    It's a wonderful poem, Joanna. There is indeed light at the end of the tunnel. Never doubt it. I have walked a long way myself and I can guarantee you that the change you long for exists. The only thing that you might not be able to perceive now is just how amazing it will be. It will totally exceed your expectations. It will blow you away. Pure joy, love and happiness do that.
    Thank you, Valixy I appreciate your kind and encouraging words. Not only on my poem but on what I am trying to heal within myself lately. Hugs! x

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    Quote Originally Posted by Exeter19 View Post
    really nice poem, joanna and i liked what valixy told you as well. hope you share more.
    Thank you, Exeter. I wrote a lot more since posting and going on my new medications. I will sort through them and next visit I will copy another poem to forum.

    Also thank you , bluenote and pcmaster for liking my poem.

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    It is always the most dark before the dawn. nothing lasts forever, especially the bad times.

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    Thank you, FAndrews. I hope it doesn't, I have some good days lately, but not enough to make me feel good about everything just yet.

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