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Thread: Loving or nothing, stay,go, i love u, i hate u

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    Loving or nothing, stay,go, i love u, i hate u

    Labyrinths of love will meet us again in this crazy Irish train

    Mavi sweeter than honey, my honneybunny

    Her eyes so green, her mind so kind, I couldn't get her out of my mind.

    The perfect girl,she went thru me like a twirl.

    My mind is gone ,Mavi is not at home.

    Her chocolate body made me crazy more than patrick Swayze. Her intelligence,a brilliance.

    Her hair so long,the whole beach move along.

    A real woman, for a man, with her natural tan.

    Caring & loving soul, not for a bar crawl.

    I met her one night and got a stage fright.

    She touched my soul and heart and left me without a card.

    Why does my heart feels so bad, she is mad.Angry and pissed of at me, oh lord, meu deus, Zeus is even creating chaos.

    Oh a second chance,she never even glance.

    Oh Mavi,my alfajora,prettier and smarter than flora.

    A bunny,a honney,money cant bring her back to Sunny.

    Fell in love,so deep,so steep it is impossible to sleep.

    Painless,restless,she is building a fortress.

    Oh she says u called, too late boy. Voy, I am not a toy,she says.Not a robot.Not that gal she said,I need no aid.

    Holding hands, being close,Constantine is so composed.

    Oh girl,I miss u,I kiss u.A princess, a queen,I could have foreseen.

    My Mavi,a Madhavi,one of a kind, she is in my mind.

    Oh I say Apolonia''s queen.No she said, it's just a theme.

    I am coming back, it came firing back.

    Her smile, I could enjoy from mile.

    Her kisses,gentle, heart misses.Argy girl, a brazilian,she is worth more than a billion.

    So what happened, asked the wind my kind king?Do not,an ever, a never,I thought i was clever.

    What a sunny woman, just for a man like me.Wine and dine, was she mine? No she is telling, leave me alone.Bygone,

    u really don't now, oh boy,I am not a toy,Voy.

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    Nice poem, is this about a girl you love or loved? I like the line, " painless, restless, she is building a fortress".

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    It is Joana. A girl I love yep, i am trying to get her back. Just poured some of my heart on paper.
    Usually I come up with better lines, I hope she got moved by it a bit. At least she read it.
    Thanks.

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    Nice one, I like it

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    I feel this way!

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