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Thread: Collection of Poems, by RSK

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    Collection of Poems, by RSK

    It's easy to be me
    I've finally broken free
    My own prison I've built
    My emotions' on tilt

    I've been stabbed too much
    I no longer bleed
    I've cried too much
    No more tears - I've dried up

    I'm all that remains
    This hollow heart
    I'm all that remains
    This soul ripped apart

    Yet it's easy to be me
    I've now broken free

    You can never make me hurt
    Because I've allready tasted the dirt

    Yes, it's easy to be me
    It's easy to be me

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    Quote Originally Posted by RSK
    It's easy to be me
    I've finally broken free
    My own prison I've built
    My emotions' on tilt....

    NEXT!
    [url]http://rsk.cx.la[/url]
    Last edited by whaywardj; 01-08-05 at 07:12 AM.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    Oh, Wow! That's the third poem I've pumped out in two days! I think I need a breather, but I'll return and post again, thanks!

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    Don't get yer kickers in a bind. Just thought I'd temprorarily throw a little something up on the web to give you a little motivation. Speak less. Say more. (That's what poetry is all about, BTW.) I'm not gonna put anything on the page I think is shit, or believe you're just "pumping out" for the sake of hearing yourself babble at the loudest possible volume. Do it right. Do it well. Take your time. After a little while, maybe, you'll have enough GOOD work collected on one place to mean something.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    Hey, thanks bro! You could be my own personal editor! Yeah - Sounds good! I'll type stuff out, and I'll give you permission to weed out the bad poetry, and you can keep the good ones and post them on the link! We could be a team!

    And to think! RSK and whaywardj! Well, we proved them wrong, didn't we?

    So, I'll keep posting poems, and you choose what's worthy/not worthy!

    Thanks Partner!

    (BTW, I think my keyboard has run out of exclamation marks! never mind - there are a few more, here let me empty it out, !!!!!!! ! ! ! - there, I'm done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RSK
    Hey, thanks bro! You could be my own personal editor! Yeah - Sounds good! I'll type stuff out, and I'll give you permission to weed out the bad poetry, and you can keep the good ones and post them on the link! We could be a team!

    And to think! RSK and whaywardj! Well, we proved them wrong, didn't we?

    So, I'll keep posting poems, and you choose what's worthy/not worthy!

    Thanks Partner!

    (BTW, I think my keyboard has run out of exclamation marks! never mind - there are a few more, here let me empty it out, !!!!!!! ! ! ! - there, I'm done.
    Get your head on straight and stop talking out the side of your neck, pal. I'm doing you a favor -- for only as long as I care to. Unless I see silver crossing my palm, I don't need your permission for shit. I'm not gonna "edit" nothing. I'm just not putting it up if I think it's shit or bullshit. BTW, I changed the URL to [url]http://rsk.cx.la[/url]. Thought that might help calm down your ****ing ego and help you focus on doing some serious work.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    Crouched and Burried
    In the darkness of my head
    It crawls like a roach
    It haunts me to bed

    (These thoughts are attached
    Memory shows no mercy)

    My half spoken words
    I was always too quiet
    You never even knew
    that my heart belonged to you

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    Quote Originally Posted by RSK
    Crouched and Burried
    In the darkness of my head
    It crawls like a roach
    It haunts me to bed

    (These thoughts are attached
    Memory shows no mercy)

    My half spoken words
    I was always too quiet
    You never even knew
    that my heart belonged to you

    Hm. That seems to be a generally correct direction. I'd keep looking that way. At least, for that particular vein of sentiments.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    You are like Oxygen
    Without you I can't live
    You are my Home
    My heart to you I give

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    I'm cursed and consumed
    So I look for an exit
    I drown in my Sorrow
    As I follow the door
    The one that shines bright
    (But when I get there)
    Someone turns off the light
    It's an evil game they play
    But I've played it too
    This Deafening Silence
    This just aren't right

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    might i just make a suggestion and say:

    I've been stabbed too much
    I no longer bleed
    I've cried too much
    No more tears - I've dried up

    ^^that line threw that stanza off a bit. other than that good job with all of it..

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    bump for lilwing

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    hey those are pretty good

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