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    your perfect

    Im speaking from the heart
    your perfect in everyway
    you are beautiful
    something about you attracts me to you
    maybe its your huge heart
    or how amazing you are
    I see a smart beautiful and awesome woman who I truly adore
    i love looking into your pretty blue eyes
    i love making you laugh because i love to see you smile
    i want to tell you how my heart feels
    i want to tell you how much you mean to me
    i never want you to feel alone or scared
    i want to hold you in my arms and tell you how much you mean to me
    i love you for who you are and would never change that
    i would not know how you would react if I wrote this
    i hope you are touched and feel you are never alone
    that someone cares and loves you

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    Uhm... It's "you're" not "your".
    “The willingness to accept responsibility for one’s own life is the source from which self-respect springs.” ~Joan Didion

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wakeup View Post
    Uhm... It's "you're" not "your".
    ooops what can i say when u have someone on your mind you write anything as long as the point gets across lol

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    Your kindness is matched by your inner beauty
    You are and have been something I have needed, wanted and I cherish you so
    When you hurt my heart hurts
    When you smile you light up the EArth and all who see it
    We are and that is that.

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    Nice poem, con.
    It's romantic when people write something for the one they love and share it with the world.

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    Quote Originally Posted by megvoh View Post
    Nice poem, con.
    It's romantic when people write something for the one they love and share it with the world.
    but it was a waste found out the girl has a man smh oh wellz i didnt even know she was talking to someone I feel like an idiot my heart has been torn outta my chest and kicked like a football

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    Quote Originally Posted by con7876 View Post
    ooops what can i say when u have someone on your mind you write anything as long as the point gets across lol
    Your poem is beautiful. However, poor spelling and punctuation will ruin it somewhat on the receiving end. Put as much effort into the presentation as you do into the sentiment and you'll be on to a winning combo.
    Never regret anything that has happened in your life. It cannot be changed, forgotten or undone. So, take it as a lesson learned and move on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by basilandthyme View Post
    Your poem is beautiful. However, poor spelling and punctuation will ruin it somewhat on the receiving end. Put as much effort into the presentation as you do into the sentiment and you'll be on to a winning combo.
    I have never been the best writer trust me how i passed school is beyond me

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    Did you show or give her this poem beforehand, con?
    Least you took a chance.

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    Quote Originally Posted by megvoh View Post
    Did you show or give her this poem beforehand, con?
    Least you took a chance.
    no I didnt I just wrote it in here as a journal kinda deal. I woulda given it if something sparked. she's happy and im moving on but i'll be her friend im not gonna diss her. not right for me to do.maybe it was infatuation rather than true feelings who knows. on the other hand I have a date with another girl for thursday it was suppose to be on my bday wed but she has to work so lets see what happens wish me luck.

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    Okay so she has never read this? Hope your date went well and happy birthday to you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by megvoh View Post
    Okay so she has never read this? Hope your date went well and happy birthday to you.
    thanks for the bday greeting
    that girl never read it but the new girl we hanged out on my bday since she had work we had a nice talk. afterwards I gave her a hug and a kiss she was speechless in a good way we have been talking everyday since.

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    YW, did you have a good bday?

    Good goings on the successful date, hope you make many more dates, might be a relationship starting.

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    Quote Originally Posted by megvoh View Post
    YW, did you have a good bday?

    Good goings on the successful date, hope you make many more dates, might be a relationship starting.
    my bday was great best I had in a long time found out I got approved for media for a major car show next month. but yea as said we have been talking every day so I def want to see her before she leaves for florida in 2 weeks on a trip

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