Man, I want to hear the rest of this!
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Man, I want to hear the rest of this!
Tone - Window of opportunity is C L O S E D.
:-)
O U C H !
RoseB, tell RK he can find me in the back room crying whenever he's ready to continue with the story. Thank you.
Want a tissue Tone???
Aww, now I feel bad. You can dry your tears on my bosom.
LOL, shh. You broke Tone's heart!!!
Way to kick a girl when she's down, Rosebud. :sad2:Quote:
Originally Posted by Rosebud
Huh? What's that, RoseB? Sorry I was busy posting in the Dumping Forum..
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Originally Posted by shh!
Hey you said it, but i'll give you a tissue to if you need?? And some Peanut buttern M&M's if you'd like?????
me --> :astonish:
then --> :upset:
then -->:mad:
enter -->:stache:
me --> :love:
and now --> :cool:
You had me up the mustache part.....LOL
I just like the peanut kind. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Rosebud
ok well you can have some of those then... Anything to make you feel better..:)
(funny stuff above, lol)
...and then Tone said..."Hey, OV, did it ever occur to you, that RSK and I are enjoying this type of punishment?"
OV had a confession too, "Umm, yes, I think i got carried away - I was enjoying it too", he confessed...
...after a few minutes of an akward silence, OV left the dungeon.
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RSK leaned over to Tone: "Nice work Tone. Good thinking!"
Tone: "I just couldn't take it anymore, i had to think of something".
RSK: "Now, See if you can pick these locks"
Tone: "GOT IT!"
RSK: GOOD! Now let's get out of here.
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they crept out of the dungeon bars, and lept through the palace walls. They decided to split up, and meet at 'Lloyds Park', which was 1500 paces beyond the palace walls.
each bid the other farewell.
rsk headed toward the river route, and tone journyed through the palace, in search for an exit.......
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Tone found a door, and opened it. Little did he know, that he was about to meet the love of his life, the woman of his dreams. he entered the Princesses room.
Standing their, Princess Shh! was speechless. her eyes in shock and awe!
Said Tone, gracefully..."Hello..."
He was nervous...felt as electricity running through is veins..."I am Tone, 121st Soldier of Army of Empire of Light. I have been arrested on charges of rude conduct. My apologies for my attire. I plan to escape from the prison. Your father, the King, will summon me to death if I stay here. "...his heart beat faster, and his breaths were faster but longer...
Shh! responded..."STOP, just STOP"...
Tone was speechless...words wanted to come out, but his throat wouldn't allow it...
Shh! continued..."You had me at Hello...YOU HAD ME AT 'HELLO'"...
--Cue inspirational 'falling in love' music--
"QUICK, take my Jacket, and escape through the window", she said...
Tone took one long look at her, and said "Meet me at Lloyds Garden at noon tommorow", and then he left............
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NEXT MORNING........
RSK was waiting, it was past noon, and no sign of Tone. However, in the distance, approached what seemed to be a begger...
....when the begger revieled a mask, RSK was SHOCKED, "What is the Princess doing here?".
(funny stuff above, lol)
...and then Tone said..."Hey, OV, did it ever occur to you, that RSK and I are enjoying this type of punishment?"
OV had a confession too, "Umm, yes, I think i got carried away - I was enjoying it too", he confessed...
...after a few minutes of an akward silence, OV left the dungeon.
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RSK leaned over to Tone: "Nice work Tone. Good thinking!"
Tone: "I just couldn't take it anymore, i had to think of something".
RSK: "Now, See if you can pick these locks"
Tone: "GOT IT!"
RSK: GOOD! Now let's get out of here.
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they crept out of the dungeon bars, and lept through the palace walls. They decided to split up, and meet at 'Lloyds Park', which was 1500 paces beyond the palace walls.
each bid the other farewell.
rsk headed toward the river route, and tone journyed through the palace, in search for an exit.......
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Tone found a door, and opened it. Little did he know, that he was about to meet the love of his life, the woman of his dreams. he entered the Princesses room.
Standing their, Princess Shh! was speechless. her eyes in shock and awe!
Said Tone, gracefully..."Hello..."
He was nervous...felt as electricity running through is veins..."I am Tone, 121st Soldier of Army of Empire of Light. I have been arrested on charges of rude conduct. My apologies for my attire. I plan to escape from the prison. Your father, the King, will summon me to death if I stay here. "...his heart beat faster, and his breaths were faster but longer...
Shh! responded..."STOP, just STOP"...
Tone was speechless...words wanted to come out, but his throat wouldn't allow it...
Shh! continued..."You had me at Hello...YOU HAD ME AT 'HELLO'"...
--Cue inspirational 'falling in love' music--
"QUICK, take my Jacket, and escape through the window", she said...
Tone took one long look at her, and said "Meet me at Lloyds Garden at noon tommorow", and then he left............
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NEXT MORNING........
RSK was waiting, it was past noon, and no sign of Tone. However, in the distance, approached what seemed to be a begger...
....when the begger revieled a mask, RSK was SHOCKED, "What is the Princess doing here?"...........
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhh, what happens next???????
I likey!!
Since I am so well-behaved in real life, can I have a thing going on with someone on the side in this story? A girl's got to live a little...
:-)
*BUMP*
Hey RK you should make this like a mini-series you'd see on TV or somethin. Ya know.. like every Monday it gets a new "episode"
hey, sup Tone!
I completely forgot about the story! But i like your idea! Every Monday, I will 'post' a new 'episode'. I like writing, it's kind of a hobby - very relaxing! and if you all are enjoying it, then that makes it better!
Maybe we can have re-runs too! Every Monday's - I will post it for a 2 hour block, and then i will delete the post. if you want to catch the re-run, it'll be on the next day, for another 2 hour block. and then we could also have a season finale! (LOL - OKAY, I"M KIDDING PEOPLE)
but yeah, i could post a little every week, great idea Tone! Thx.
also, if you guys want to post an 'episode' - BE MY GEUST! that would also be great, and we could feed off other peoples stories! that's only if you want!
ahahahhahaha that would be HILARIOUS!!!!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by RSK
No way dude, you have to write them. More entertaining that way, besides if you let Lloyd, Hayward, or TAVS write some episdoes they'll try to kill me off!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by RSK
rofl,Quote:
Originally Posted by Tone
OK, so it's ON!!!!!!!!!!
.....RSK met Princess Shh!, and learned about her encounter with Tone.
They waited for him..............3 sunsets went by...but still no sign.
RSK had to break a promise; he inscribed a note on the oak tree...
"My dear freind, Tone. I hope this note finds you in good health and spirit. The princess and I are headed to Lockley Villiage. We anticipate your arrival. Your friend, RK".
Princess Shh! and RSK left the garden. BOTH - leaving something:
RSK - his life long friend
Princess Shh! - the love of her life
(little did they know, that they would not see him for another 2 and 0 (20) years. And the person they'd meet, is out to kill RSK)
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(2 Sunsets LATER)
Tone, half drenched in blood - almost disfigured, finally approached the Garden.
[the kings guards caught him escaping, and took him prisoner. they wanted to know where his daughter went - BUT HE REFUSED to answer. His loyalty to RSK and Love for the Princess outweighed the need for him to live. He would die for them. he was succesful in his second escape. however, he reached Lloyds Garden.......too late......]
He fell to his knees - and leaned on the Oak Tree. All he had to do, was look behind, and he would see the note!!! He was THAT CLOSE to changing the path his journey would take
In the future, he would question: WOULD RK BE ALIVE, HAD HE SEEN THE NOTE?
but it didn't happen...this was destiny unfolding...
Thought Tone: "My friend whom I call loyal. The friend I risked my life for. My friend who Leaves me here to Rot. Friend is just a word".
For the first time in his life, the feeling of betrayal hit him....he would ONE day, seek revenge...he made this pledge.
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20 years later:
(I'll describe where each of the charactars ARE at this point, in the next post, untill then, sit tight - and stay tuned next week.)
(THIS IS JUST THE BEGINNING)
WOW!
WOW!
WOW!
WOOOOOOOOW!
This is really getting good, RK! You got a real talent and creative imagination! And I'm not just sayin that cause we're in the same internet gang.
I can't wait to read the next installment!!
I object. I don't want to be 20 years older. Maybe you can leave me in the forest with the handsome ogre.
LoL but 20 human years is like 2 princess years, shh!
You'll look like you haven't aged a day. :]
lol shh! princesses NEVER age :)
hey, thx Tone...I'm sorry the story led this way...i wanted us to be a team, but friends becoming enemies creates more drama. hopefully, i can integrate sex, violence, love, passion, betrayal, loyalty, and vengence more as the story goes on! also, i hope i can integrate more LF members too!
20 years later:
RSK and Shh!
Moved and Settled in Lockley Villiage. A Province separate from the Kindgom of Light. RSK gained high respect, and was nominated Senator of State. Shh! was expecting their first child. They married long ago. Sometimes, they would think about Tone - but NEVER talk about him. They lived a peaceful life.
Tone
For 20 years, he has had one thought on him mind: To Kill RSK, the man who left him to rot. The man who took his LOVE. He changed his identity. He was known as Enot. Under this new idenity - he was able to join the army again. Has hired a spy (Fras) to look for RSK and Shh!
King Cybog
Has grown old. Is nearing the end of this life. His last wish - to see his daughter.
misombra
Thinks about her daughter EVERYDAY for the past 20 years. Hopes she is doing well. Hopes she returns home.
OV
Has remained the Kings loyal man.
Zek
Has died. He was killed in a battle 5 years ago. (If I need him, I'll bring him back alive, and pretend the war never happened).
More LF members coming soon.........stay tuned :)
LOL good stuff... I can't wait to meet Queen Junsui and steal her away and have a huge war like "The Trojan Horse" over her.
Nah! Junsui is going to be on our side...
oooo Queen Junsui, has a nice ring to it. ;)
we allready have a queen, but junsui can be the hot towns-woman, who accompanies Tone on his journey to lockley villiage.
Boo! I'll be a Queen somewhere else!
junsui, don't worry, you are the towns-woman for now, but as the story progresses - your true identity will reveal itself - because, you, indeed are a princess.
you are shh!'s half sister!
i can't give too much away, the entire story is in my head, and it's going to be a bitter sweet ending
woohoo! I get to be shh!'s sister. :)
half sister ----> misombra has been involved in a little 'hanky panky' with OV, it gets complicated, but that 'could' be a side story :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Junsui
LOL misombra... I'M SORRY!Quote:
Originally Posted by RSK
immaculate conception!!
ooo Yeah! Good idea, shh!
ACT II
"Sir, sir, I found them! I FOUND THEM!!!!! They are at Lockley Villiage"
The voice belonged to a Hunch-back, dwarfed, bony man - Fras. - He was devious and trecherous - a SPY. But has ALWAYS been loyal to Enot.
Enot dug his hand into his long, black, cloak-pocket, and pulled out four golden credits. He turned toward Fras: "For your efforts"....
For 2 and 0 years, Enot had DREAMED of this day - when rsk and shh would be found. ...however, with the news, also came a 'whirlwind' of emotion...
...the mere 'thought' of RSK made Enots' stomach twist. His desire to seek revenge on RSK was aparant, from the FIRE in his eyes...
and his love for shh! filled his hollow heart with hope and pain...
HOWEVER...........Enot knew that his EMOTIONS must be concealed. He was about to embark on an adventure. Lockley villiage was 6 days and 7 nights away - He had time to prepare. He would gather 3 of his MEN to assist him. The journey to Lockley villiage was dangerous.
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Enot (TONE), devised a plan:
He would conceal himself in his new identity, and come FACE to FACE with RSK and Shh! If things went to plan, RSK and Shh! would welcome Enot to their house. Enot will befriend them, and gain their TRUST.
When the time is right, he will KILL RSK and reviel himself to Shh!
HOWEVER, AS WITH ALL LOVE STORIES - THERE ARE ALWAYS TWISTS TO THE TWIST!
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This part of the story, will be next weeks 'episode' - ACT III. Here, Enot and his three men will journey the 6 days and 7 nights to Lockley villiage. On the way, the three men are killed, and Enot meets a lady - Junsui. She is a farmer (or is she). STAY TUNED!
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(continued from next week)...............on the 7th night, Enot and Junsui were closer to Lockley, than they thought...
"i see the villiage gates", said Junsui in desperation
(They hadn't drank water or ate food in DAYS.)
After a few more steps, Enot found himself standing by a small stream of water. Junsui started sipping, but Enot stood still. He gazed into the distance...he eyed the villiage gates, and the torch of fire on either side. 'RSK will be right under my nose!'..........he thought with a smile.
Junsui got up, and wiped her face, "let's go", Enot said. They made their way to the front gates. A friendly face approached them.....it was the gatekeeper, Jaye.
Said Jaye..."Welcome to Lockley villiage, how may i help you?".
Replied Enot..."We come in peace. We have been banished from our states, we seek refuge here"
Jaye was confused - Is this Legal? - he thought! "Come in, I will call a Senator to meet with you..."
Enot and Junsui waited patiently....NERVOUSLY, but patient, nonetheless.
In the gloomy fog of the night, apprached a figure toward Enot. He was tall, and wore clothes of a noble man. COULD THIS BE RSK? - thought Enot. As the figure approached, Enot could see the wrinkles in his face - he was THAT close!...
...The Senator put a name to his face...
"Welcome, my name is RSK, one of 7 Senators of this City"
Enot slowly lowerd his left hand, which found it's way to his inside left cloak pocket. his fingers gripped the handle of his army knife. he felt sweat coming from his forehead. He GRIPPED his knife...and his whole body became stiff.......it ALL could've ended here. Just ONE strike to the throat.....
.........he regained his senses. 'Not now, not now - he thought'
Instead, he let go of his grip, and reached out the arm to greet.....
"And I am Enot, and this is Junsui", he felt releived.
"Come to my quarters and rest tonight, you must be tired, please....", insisted RSK
Enot agreed with a smile, and nod; the three of them made way.............
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So, next week, we have the '6 days 7 nights adventure', and the week after, we have the 'NEXT MORNING', when Enot meets Shh! and gains the trust of RSK.......things are heating up in Lockley !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
Oh WOW! Rsk you are really good at writing stories!!!! I'm very impressed!
In the meantime, Enot is sleeping with Junsui. And you expect us to believe that he would still be interested in pursuing me?
hahahahahahahahahhahaaha
"Jaye was confused - Is this Legal? - he thought!" <-- This part made me laugh!