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    5 minute poem

    on the way home i thought of you
    and everything we used to do
    i made a choice to fight for you
    and how it felt to be with you

    the songs leaking from the radio
    describe the way it feels
    to be seperated, like the sea
    and it still hurts in me

    by myself, on a lonely eve
    impaled by needles of the christmas tree
    with all the christmas presents at my feet
    and a puddle of clothes, naked at my knees

    animals of wrapping paper all around,
    and materialistic things were all i found
    all i wanted was not allowed
    and shipped left of south

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    with this feeling i can be free
    alone in my head always to be
    a feeling so soft it beckons me
    a peace within thats the key

    try to find me all you want
    and hum to me a simple tune
    a swift and graceful hunt
    ill be waiting there at noon

    the pedals in the breeze
    your heart is left at ease
    if only this would cease
    my mind can find release
    There are moments when one feels free from one's own identification with human limitations and inadequacies. At such moments one imagines that one stands on some spot of a small planet, gazing in amazement at the cold yet profoundly moving beauty of the eternal, the unfathomable; life and death flow into one, and there is neither evolution nor destiny; only Being. - Albert Einstein

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    good, you got the idea. the idea is to write a 5 minute poem ( i trust you.. a man is only as good as his word) and post it here.

    just a mind expanding game.

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