What you're saying is disjointed and doesn't really say anything about you.
"You like to fathom astonishing relations?" What does that even mean? What it says is that you like to think about awesome relations. Does that mean you actually don't want one, you just want to dream about one?
"You like challenges" That's fine but you haven't said that you're good at conquering said "challenges" or what you've accomplished so far in your life.
You "regularly perform in concerts" but what do you play in these concerts? An instrument? Which one? Do you sing? which genre?
You "compose something" What DO YOU COMPOSE? What is the "something?"
"Vocationally my goal is to make fascinating discoveries in my area? What is your area? What would be some of the things that other people could enjoy? Are you saying you'd like to make a recording and hope that others will enjoy your talent? You're not clear.
"be it so they can be helped" What? "or just because of their interest." Again; What?
You have to rewrite and make sure that your sentences have the structure they need to actually convey what it is that you're tryng to convey.
You'd do well to go to the Profile Creating Help section of your dating site because the impression you leave me with is "confusion."
Good luck.
What do you do for fun?
What are you interests? Other then performing whatever it is you perform in concerts? Is that you're career or is it your hobby?
What are your end dating goals? It would be nice to read what you hope to accomplish while you do your online dating.
Last edited by Wakeup; 26-09-14 at 05:02 PM.
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