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Thread: hopes, dreams, thoughts, prayers

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    hopes, dreams, thoughts, prayers

    a dimple: an invitation for mischievous thought

    a daring comment: pure calculation in the spirit of the game

    a crime: dark emotions swirling like thunderheads around the horrific contrast between yesterday and now

    a hello: a nugget of warmth, a long-awaited miracle, gratifying, joy-packed, and contained in a few simple words

    a heart throb: a tiny ray of hope, tenuous kindling that will become a roaring blaze, defying all loneliness

    the perfect state of mind: what normally would be a row of three empty beers is now a lone-bottle row with nothing but a cursory sip removed from its contents
    "I rarely drive steamboats, dad!"

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    Eh?

    what is that all about?hmmmmm......don't have any idea really :nerd

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    that was good quesadillas!!!

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    keko-

    first, you're wrong. I do like it and I'm not disappointed.

    second, you're right. what are you talking about f*cker?

    you need to get drunk! Sounds like alcohol withdrawal syndrome or something.

    peace dude!
    "Ogres are like onions."

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    i think you like the word mischievous.

    "the mischievous darting of your gaze give it away..."

    okay... i think i'm ready to break it down. assuming that you don't have dimples, you're talking about another person's dimple encouraging you to think mischievous thoughts...

    that leads to the daring comment.. playing the game..

    the hello and the heart throb~ the hello leads to the heart throb? the happiness and excitement from that hello makes your heart go crazy, and even though it's just a simple hello, it's so much more.

    the crime is the dark emotion, but is this part of the game that the writer is reminiscing about? the past and today?
    anyway, it's too packed for me.
    "Ogres are like onions."

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    thank you all, far too kind, far too kind
    "I rarely drive steamboats, dad!"

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    too kind? what an unexpected response.
    "Ogres are like onions."

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