the poetry forum crapola for lilwing

[miSSleepy]

We're getting off topic here.

1. You heard me.

I fail to see how the two are connected.

[quote] 2. Unless you're studying fine arts, technically, your opinions are *still* uneducated. [/squote]

Fine arts? As in paintbrush/canvas/sculptures etc? What has that got to do with creative writing?

3. Too many things to entail in one post. And again, is offtopic. I guess if you want to continue that argument, make yourself a thread and I'll be happy to include what I know.

Well go ahead. I remember reading somewhere that you're 18 though, so I'm sceptical.

4. The poem does move me. I think it is good *shrug* however, if I were the one writing it, I'd have all kinds of things to change about it. But it's not mine.

obviously your job isn't to actually choose what gets published then.

[Illusional]

??? what am i missing here??

raverboy

[Kiechi]

"a poem"


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[tooxshort]

omg ... Let it go ...

MisSleepy, you didn't like it.

They didn't like your approach.

*BAM* Case closed.

[miSSleepy]

omg ... Let it go ...

MisSleepy, you didn't like it.

They didn't like your approach.

*BAM* Case closed.

Hey lay off, he suggested I make another thread because he'd be only too happy to explain. So here he can explain.

[IndiReloaded]

omg ... Let it go ...

MisSleepy, you didn't like it.

They didn't like your approach.

*BAM* Case closed.

+1 Thanks Shorty.

LOL, I was expecting to see samples of crapola poetry on this thread & explanations as to why its bad. I was *hoping* to actually learn something for a change.

[DoesntMatter]

It's kind of surprising how many people like poetry. I hate it to no end, and would wipe my ass with pieces of poetry if the paper was soft enough

Short, funny limmericks are cool though

[miSSleepy]

Well if someone wants to post a crapola poem and explain why it's bad, go for it. Or did you expect me to do it? I can do that, I'll go find some crap poems elsewhere

[IndiReloaded]

Short, funny limmericks are cool though

Ha! I almost posted one in the other thread but...well, here it is:

A rather strange dude down in Delaware
Liked to have someone stick an umbrella where
You and I couldn't stand it --
He'd just howl and demand it
Right up his... Oh, surely you're well aware.

[DoesntMatter]

Lol thats good

I heard another limmerick once and posted it here before but its worth a repeat


There once was a fellow named Ray,
Who fashioned a cunt out of clay,
But the heat of his prick,
Turned the clay into brick,
And tore all his foreskin away

[miSSleepy]

There once was a man from Newcastle
who wrapped up some shit in a parcel
He sent it by mail, with a note to explain
it came from his grandmother's arsehole.




It's a regional limerick I guess, from my home city. You may have to read it in an Australian accent to get the full rhyme going

[vashti]

Aww, we had an original limerick war going with Illusional. he lost, though.

[anachronistic]

I once knew a man of fine mass,
whose balls were made out of brass,
and in stormy weather they both clanked together
and sparks flew out of his ass

[IndiReloaded]

There once was a man from Newcastle
who wrapped up some shit in a parcel
He sent it by mail, with a note to explain
it came from his grandmother's arsehole.




It's a regional limerick I guess, from my home city. You may have to read it in an Australian accent to get the full rhyme going

I'm gonna be in Australia this year! Looking forward to it. I hear its a vast, beautiful continent. My firsst vist, BTW.

[miSSleepy]

O yeh it's vast, just very cluttered around the east coast. Which city will you be going to?