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    Love Poem Title Help

    i wrote this for my girlfriend and can't think of a title, any suggestions?

    Your beauty glowing like the rays
    Of our golden sun
    Your body is like God’s clay
    Molded until done

    What I feel when I’m around you,
    Is it lust or love, who knows?
    But every time I’m near you
    This feeling always grows

    I miss you when you’re gone
    I love it when you’re here
    I will always be there for you
    So you’ll never shed a tear

    Just in case you’re wondering
    I do love you very much
    In fact so much that each night
    I can’t wait to feel your touch

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    Burn the paper it was written on and save yourself the shame of having shared it with your girlfriend, let alone the internet at large.

    Learn other forms of poetry that do not require simple rhyming schemes, get a thesaurus, and really you'd just be better off writing her a letter telling her how you feel.
    "Well, then," the Cat went on, "you see a dog growls when it's angry, and wags its tail when it's pleased. Now I growl when I'm pleased, and wag my tail when I'm angry. Therefore I'm mad."

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