Noooooo......DO NOT SAY THIS.
Let's start from the beginning: What is it you want to achieve? Are you trying to attract her, drive her away or just have her think that you think you're an idiot? Because your speech covers all of those options.
When you know what outcome you want, then we can help you figure out something which actually makes sense. Out of curiosity, have you ever successfully asked a girl out before?
Let me spell it out for you....I've bolded her thoughts
"(Her name)There is something i have been wanting to tell you for a long time,and if at any point you feel uncomfortable just tell me to stop. Oh, God, what's he about to say? what i wanted to say is that i really like and i think you are a beautiful and strong young woman. I love being around you and every time i am i feel happy. That wasn't so bad. But what's with the 'young woman' adjective? Now i know you don't feel the same way You assume to know what I think? but this is something that i needed to say do that i can move on. Oh, you want to move on. So, you're not interested....well why are you telling me this...because if all you want is to move on, then I really don't need to know I am sorry if i have made you uncomfortable and i will understand if you do not want to reply. I also want you to understand that if you reply or not it will not affect how i treat you at the school or anywhere else.Also if you want i will leave you alone the rest of the day." What in earth is he going on about? Why did he give me that big blurb...say that he knows I don't feel the same way and then say that he doesn't need a response. He's crazy. Eyeroll and grimace
Edited to add: all the apologies and understanding about making her uncomfortable just scream INSECURE. Insecurity is not attractive. Quit with all the apologies and understandings if you want to be successful.
Last edited by basilandthyme; 06-03-13 at 04:38 PM.
Never regret anything that has happened in your life. It cannot be changed, forgotten or undone. So, take it as a lesson learned and move on.