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Thread: An Evening in November

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    An Evening in November

    the sky was lined with thin streaks of cloud
    patching the night like a torn shroud
    behind which the moon would peek out
    gracing your face with its warm light
    through every fight and cold night i spent alone
    it was that night that reminds me of you most
    i was so close to you and thats all i really ever wanted
    i recall in that same night i kissed you on the cheek
    you smiled at me and i knew that under the circumstances you had feelings toward me

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    this was an great attempt, well done, the last line though i think needs a bit of change, Good luck my friend.

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