i want to give this to an amazing girl. but i need advise first. please help!

[jake_7891]

this is one of those things that just might be crazy enough to work. but one of those things

that just might ruin everything there ever was and will be. please enjoy.



just imagine it. sitting around a stone camp fire with all of your best friends having the time

of your life, talking about things to come, and great memmories from the past.

In your most comfortable physical and mental state of self confidence, you are sitting next to the

girl of your dreams, the one who brings you laughter, peace, and beauty, as well as a stone cold face of determination

and truth. its the brisk autumn air and the falling orange and red leaf, that just for a breif moment you question,

why cant every day be as beautiful as this one? Why are my feelings for this woman so strong?

strong. yes thats what i need. i need someone strong. i can provide the strong arms and grip to protect

and hold you tight against my chest. but i need your stong mind. i need your strong confidence, and most of all i need your

strong beautiful eyes to take a grip on my heart and never let go. we were ment for this to happen,

it all makes sense and would fall right into place only if you would let it. if only you would give it a chance.

But... its not the way this works. story of my life right? its going to be a never ending battle for me.

Ill never look at a woman the same without comparing her to your gorgious personality and bright smile to cheer

me up. Of course ill never find that in anyone else but you, because i wont let it. all im asking is please.

please give me a shot at this. please guide me through the ropes and let me learn your mind and body inside and out.

What do you say?

[TheCafeTerrace]

Erm... flowers are still a classic mate. To be completely honest it's a little heavy on the imagery and melodrama, and it has a nasty tinge of self-pity towards the end, and the "let me learn your body inside and out" is just kind of gross. Generally the whole thing made my soul throw up a little, no offence. Plus it's riddled with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, that wouldn't matter to some girls, but it sticks out like a bad smell to some people (like me.) My recommendation is that under no circumstances should you ever present this letter to another human being. You're half a glass of Lambrini away from writing one of those mid-adolescent free-verse poems.

[surfhb]

Ehhhh....most girls would ignore you for being...pardon the expression....A Pussy!

[Boisdevie]

It would make me want to vomit

[vashti]

This level of obsession is only welcomed by a woman who already loves you.

[Cerby]

This is not a good letter to send. Have you tried walking up to her and asking her to go out for coffee?

[BackUpOrGetStng]

I think it is touching, and she would be delighted to receive that letter. It's all in how you present it, but I think this could definitely work. Just be you, and go for it!

[Maple1714]

I think it is touching, and she would be delighted to receive that letter. It's all in how you present it, but I think this could definitely work. Just be you, and go for it!

this response from you surprises me...

[vashti]

this response from you surprises me...

Pretty sure it was sarcasm.

[Maple1714]

Pretty sure it was sarcasm.

I know...lol. Pretty funny really

[BackUpOrGetStng]

Have you fiendish, blackhearted sirens no feelings?? It pains me to hear you speak like this of my suggestion, as sarcasm.

This man feels this woman echoing in his soul, and he needs to let it out.

[Maple1714]

Have you fiendish, blackhearted sirens no feelings?? It pains me to hear you speak like this of my suggestion, as sarcasm.

This man feels this woman echoing in his soul, and he needs to let it out.

I knew you had a sensitive side to you BackUp!

[Lynda]

hi,

I find it very romantic, that's the way I am. no matter how cheezy it seams, it's still beautiful and touching if you say it with honesty and at the right moment. I find the people on this forum to often harsh in their responses. I say go with your heart, or else you will regret it some day if you never do it.

good luck, let me know if you do it

Lynda